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Lost in this moment


"Lost in this moment"

a shooting star sears across a soothing night sky
and we lay out in this open field
reflections of a star that has died
lost deep within our eyes
with my hand wrapped gently around yours
i can feel your hair against my skin
as it blows rhythmically with the wind
and im living for this moment
where time stands still
and your hair against my skin
is the only thing that i feel
and your breath against my ear
is the only thing that i hear
and we find ourselves here
caught in this moment
time stood still
and laying next to you
life has become perfect
so even if its just for the moment
know i wouldnt let it go for anything
that the world has to give
because laying next to you
time stands still
and for once your love is all i can feel

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What the swift mind beholds at every turn."
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Beautiful. All of your work is, but this is really very good.

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hehe this is my personal favorite too, glad you enjoy it

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What the swift mind beholds at every turn."
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Oh my word, that first line must have been read a million times. Do you ever read a poem and one line stands out and touches you so much the rest of the poem kinda gets put to the side, sorry i've done that but that line is class!

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VERY well done! emoticon emoticon emoticon
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Your poetry is so lovely! I am an official fan!!!!

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Days of burning sun
Watch the colours run
Into pools that catch the eye
Disappear as you pass by
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yeah i agree with all that has been said above that is a great poem.

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Jolly good show old boy!!!!!! That was much better than anything I could ever achieve :D :D :D

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