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realization.


For the very first time last night I saw a shooting star
It flew through the sky real fast but it didnt go far
At that fleeting moment I finally realized this...
There has been many things throughout my life that I have missed
To never have felt true love or a meaningful kiss
Seems every person I meet come with an unordered twist
On the menu is doses of pain, mentally designed to drive you insane
To play with ones mind is a person who is cruel and unkind
Telling bold untruths as if to make out you are blind
To say I still have hope or optimism would be telling a lie
I am now resigned to the fact I will be alone when I die
Too tired now of doing the dance and playing the game
I did it for years and it was all in vain
For all the things that have happened I take my share of the blame
Though its funny how all the other parties feel no need to do the same
crushed and hurt constantly lifting my face out of the dirt
Tired and alone sinking down into my safety zone
Whats the first thing you think when you meet somebody new?
the first thing I think is that I used to be like you.





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I say.......that was rather good. I always said that women were like suicide bombers.......they walk into your heart and then blow it to pieces so those words ring rather true here.

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Some forced. Some not. An enjoyable poem.
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i like this poem it was a good read and i did like how you ended it in this one

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