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A year has turned it's face away,
And still it feels like yesterday,
Our eyes met in a crowded bar,
We shared a dance, you stole my heart,
But now I need you even more,
Than I ever needed you before,
Praying you will come to see,
You are the only man for me.

The only man that I see,
In a crowd or all alone,
The only man I want holding me,
When my day is done.
The one who knows,
Just what I need,
Who's always there,
To stand by me,
Baby, you are,
The only man for me.

I don't know why I hesitate,
To sit with pen in hand,
I need to tell you how I feel,
Need to make you understand,
That I need to be the only girl,
That you think of in this whole world,
And want to be with, well you can,
Because baby you are the only man.

To say "I love you" shouldn't be so tough,
But you tell me it doesn't mean that much,
I've made mistakes in the past, it's true,
But I couldn't live with me if I lost you.
So let's just get back to being you and me,
However long it takes to make you see,
Do you remember how good we used to be?
Even then you were the only man for me.

A.S.Downs
09-05-07
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it is a very good poem and a nice read although only small thing i did notice is the rhyme was hard to place as a pattern it seem just random but still the story told was a good one like i said.

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