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Mirror & Colours

Mirror
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Incomplete shards of glass
Illuminating reflections of insanity
Weaving through past events
Liquid light flows through my veins
Hope is a killer.
I’m undone now
Awaiting my judgment
Knowledge of guilt soothes
Pain is what you make of it
My sorrows disgust me
Unutterable thoughts crowd my brain
Weakness takes root
Emptiness comforts

Colors

Silence drowns out my screams
Pride in differences
Differences for pride
I paint myself
In hues of predictable colors
Clashes with unseen enemies
An armour made of feathers
Pushed to my knees
This moment is eternal, infinite
Love for life
Unfettered, infinite
The rain washes away the luminous colors
The painting remains incomplete

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very nice! you have some definate talent

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Thanks, that means a lot, especially from you...:) I just read your new poem 'A Soldier Lies Dying' and it blew me away! It was really insightful!

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aww, ty
Wow, nothing starts out a morning like reciprocal emoticon

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lol for me on the other side of the world, it's a great end to a good day!

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lol

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quote:
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Incomplete shards of glass

Illuminating reflections of insanity

Liquid light flows through my veins

My sorrows disgust me

Unutterable thoughts crowd my brain

Silence drowns out my screams

In hues of predictable colors

An armour made of feathers

Masterful, that is one of the greatest poems i've had the pleasure of reading, not only on FWU but on the majority of forums i've visited. You have a real talent, and it comes across as being so natural. Not only does your poem contain some memorable and intellectually challenging lines, but they don’t seem out of place, and your poem flows from one line to the next effortlessly. I didn’t even have time to try to divulge the meaning of the lines as i read, i just read, and then when i finished i had to reread in order to understand, the sign of a highly skilled poet.

If this is a sign of things to come i just can't wait to read more of what you have to offer, fantasic!

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Kevin TY TY TY so much!! That means a lot... it's incredible to read your review! I'm... speechless! lol emoticon

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Glad you liked it mate, you deserved it for such a masterful piece, i'm the one who is speechless, it's just incredible.

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lol ok stop it now, i can fell my ears getting hot literally emoticon

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