Silence drowns out my screams
Pride in differences
Differences for pride
I paint myself
In hues of predictable colors
Clashes with unseen enemies
An armour made of feathers
Pushed to my knees
This moment is eternal, infinite
Love for life
Unfettered, infinite
The rain washes away the luminous colors
The painting remains incomplete
I didn't see this thread earlier. I'm glad I came back in here for a better look. I really liked the poem above. Great work!
Re: Mirror & Colours Thanks Satin... i have another poem but I don't know if i'll put it up or not... it's kinda rough for some reason... (sob) I need to edit it!
--- There is no one alive in the world who is Youer than You. - Dr. Seuss
Re: Mirror & Colours Rough meaning it's not working, you know. It's got... speedbumps...lol that's the best way I have to describe it. Not flowing right.
--- There is no one alive in the world who is Youer than You. - Dr. Seuss
Re: Mirror & Colours i've replied to so many poems now but this is the first time i have been speechless i do not know whether it is because i have run out of praise or maybe and more likely it is because i am stunned to silence by the quality of this.
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