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Affame-Inspired by a Phantom of the Opera Phanfic By Savaial.

Mind and body
No distance numbs it
No Ambrosia fills it
What i feel is unconquerable
Deep in the marrow of my needful bones.
It shakes me to my soul and severs me at the throat
Leaving my blood to flow thick at your feet
As you sing, reaking havoc upon my womb

Look upon my skin as I sweat
Pearls upon a pearl sea
Kneel with me and mend my wound with flicks of your prurient tongue
Compose still as you heal me
For wound me anew it does,
The price is worth the recompense
And I would bleed out to hearken upon such sinful bliss.

Beyond my hunger,
Beyond my lust lies the love
Pure and as white as my flesh
Yes my flesh burns for the touch
That infests my cognizance
Burns for the love
That you covet and conceal behind chilled porcelain

I would give up your song for that love
Your song wrenched the love out of me
Yet now I can not have one
and not the other
Can you see? Can you feel it?
My love, my hunger, now have become one in the satin sheets of my mind.
I am hungry...Affame
MariaW 2005

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Through mists of ice and pools of fire
He champions my dark desire
With sword and shield and stalwart power
Defending lust's careening tower

A gentle maiden in his hands
He travels cross the burning sands
Over mountain, stream, and ocean
Overcome by love's devotion

Wandering through this veil of night
Two angels lost in hallowed flight
A sacrifice to love's delight
An end to hate's unending plight

IHE 2006

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Here is a silly ditty. I wrote it when I was 15. Wow, memories.

I'm a screeching Scrillodack
I roam through dark and mist
With a fierceness I attack
My victims shall I list?

I lay in silence waiting
So hoping you will come
All the while debating
To eat you all or some

Round the corner here he comes
Hope its a juicy lad
Oh, this I know I can't abide
Its my very own dear dad

"Get up my son!"
"Get on your feet!"
"You know that its quite true!"
"A diet you are on from meat!"
"Its lettuce leaves for you!"

Can you tell I loved Dr Seuss and I had five younger siblings. They loved my dumb poems. :p

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Wrote this when I was a little girl.

Nasty Sally

Sally Suthers said one day
I think I'll cause some trouble
I'll be bad in everyway
and make your problems double

What a naughty girl you are
To speak to me that way
Said the angry flustered teacher
As she turned and walked away

Sally then ran down the hall
The janitor called stop
She did not slow down at all
and tripped upon his mop

The janitor with eyebrows crossed
said all bad girls beware
of the Grimey Gimmerossed
and his slimy matted hair

What are you saying silly man
You are a stupid fool
Just go and clean the school van
You moronic impish mule

You'll be sorry when it comes
you horrible wicked child
He will chew upon your thumbs
He said with sneering smile

Sally ran off nose in air
and kicked him in the shins
swooshing round her long blonde hair
and kicking trash can bins.

Merrily she trotted on
distruction in her path
doing all that she deemed wrong
so grew the creature's wrath

Until one day she went so far
as stealing from a candy shop
after plucking from a jar
a sucker from the countertop

She turned around to see it there
a grimace on its face
covered in wet monster hair
and warts in every place

Oh back away oh don't come near
you horrible wicked beast
My thumbs are mine and mine alone
And not for you a feast

To say the least I am a beast
as you have just discovered
and on your thumbs I'll surely feast
How bout chocolate covered?

Alright I will apologize
Now I do believe
with you I hate to socialize
so go away just leave

Sally then ran down the street
the gimmerossed behind
cement pounding neath her feet
while wishing she'd been kind

When he finally caught her
the stories all came true
and as for both her thumbs
she's sadly missing two.

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Vampire Song

Dancing below a cresent moon
Feeling my hunger come forth too soon
Dry leaves crunching neath my feet
Like little dead souls between my teeth
Soft wind rustles my dishleveled hair
Ripping away my moral cares
Do I tarry in this place
And stand alone with blackened grace
Or feast on the red pooling fire
To quench my dark and lustful desire
Filled with the need to redeem my soul
Or fill it with another much deeper hole
On this for eternity I shall dwell
Alone and empty in my blissful hell.
CopyRight MWheaton

I had someone try and steal this one. Guess they liked vampires.
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Divine poetry. Artistic and creative, metaphoric and graphic in places, but at the right time and justified by its deliverance. I think your shining light was your fourth post, you used an intriguing poetic craft that caught my imagination which in turn was held firm by flowing stanza and rhythmic verse. Welcome additions to the forum I am sure all will agree.

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Why thank you! I really appreciate your thoughts on these. They are a few of my favorites. The one you enjoyed the most I just wrote recently. In fact my most recent. It seems the ones that flow the easiest that I don't have to think on to much are the best, the most from my heart.

I am so glad you think they will be appreciated here.

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Welcome additions to the forum I am sure all will agree.

my good friend, at times, summed your work up. I think i can not add much more to it ,my opinion is almost the same i am a big fan of dark stories told through poetry and you are good very good welcome to the forum and yes welcome additions without a doubt.

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