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i like how simple and yet detailed you describe the fighting that is so skilled. Also at the start it's nice to read up on the history of how people got up in the air, the training side of things i mean.

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I should probably extend those parts a bit more.......it seems like all the pilots do is hang around on the ground (although this was often the case). Second thoughts perhaps not :D :D :D LOL :D

I'm not actually sure where to take this now without killing everyone all over again. Got a few ideas but nothing huge.

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