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Chat thread about the stories here.

Figured I would post one that way we don't interrupt stories with comments. So feel free to add your thoughts!

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3/31/2009, 10:54 am

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Avaren's Book in progress: emoticon

Waiting to read more! Very nice Avaren!

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3/31/2009, 10:56 am

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Nice job, Avaren...I'm liking it so far! emoticon

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3/31/2009, 11:02 am

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thanks. I've just finished chapter one and I'm going back to write the prologue.

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3/31/2009, 12:30 pm

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your guy's story is even more awesome now! I love it.

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3/31/2009, 12:44 pm

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Thanks Avaren...glad you like it. emoticon

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3/31/2009, 12:48 pm

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Awesome job guys...I have to say there is some awesome talent in this forum. You guys rock...and I think the writing bug is biting me. I will have to pull my old notebooks out and post...will do that tonight and hopefully post some soon.

Keep up the great work Gang...You all have a major FAN here emoticon

And Bec, this was an awesome idea...I wanted so bad to post something about all of your work but did not want to mess things up LOL

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3/31/2009, 4:18 pm

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Aw, thanks Bellia...and we'd love to see your work too! That's what this place is all about, sharing! emoticon

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3/31/2009, 6:01 pm

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Thanks Bellia. Hope you will share your work. So many people have talent, and it's fun to read. emoticon

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3/31/2009, 6:35 pm

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Re: Chat thread about the stories here.

Previously, the copy I've seen from you ladies is what I think is called present perfect tense.

Ex. He sits down and sighs.

This teaser started in past tense. ( He sat down and sighed.) But, it shifted to present, then back to past. All you have to do to fix that is pick a tense and stay in it. It's an easy correction.

It's amazing how you two can write together. What a team.

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4/1/2009, 9:19 am

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Avaren, I think you might want to change this.

Sean decided he had better fallow suit if he where to ever get up in the morning and go on his hunting slash hiking trip.

Maybe write it, hunting-fishing trip. Slash means male/male romance. With the two male leads introduced it makes it sound like they have or will become lovers.

'Course, I'm all for it. LOL. You just might not want readers to get that impression.

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4/1/2009, 9:23 am

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ah very good idea. thanks

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4/1/2009, 9:41 am

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I had to smile. I write slash myself. It's very popular and a lot of people know the term.

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its is a good catch i would have never thought lol

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4/1/2009, 9:43 am

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Count on me. My mind will always drag through the smut gutter. Heheheh...

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4/1/2009, 9:45 am

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I don't know if I'm in the past or present K, story of my life. emoticon

And thanks for the suggestion. emoticon

Sue and I are cyber twins. It's down right scary how alike we are in some things. Of course, she's the smart one. emoticon

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4/1/2009, 9:49 am

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The creativity you two generate's mind-boggling.

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Thanks.. As I told Bellia and Avaren on Bellia's board. From as far back as I can remember I've loved to day dream. I could sit for hours and make up lives in my head.

Probably why I don't mind being alone. In fact I enjoy it at times. Now when I make up day dreams I just put them in type.

I remember when I was little my mom would say "Becky, why don't you have a friend over to play?"

I'd be like I am. emoticon

My bike was my horse and I was an Indian out on the plains. emoticon

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4/1/2009, 9:57 am

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I had a real horse. A big paint. But, I pretended the same thing! Even learned to shoot a single-string from horseback! LOL.

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When I lived in Texas I had a best friend (Named Becky as well). Her folks had a ranch. We would spend every free hour there riding. emoticon

Added fuel for my day dreams.

Avaren. Great adds to your story! Keep going. emoticon

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4/1/2009, 10:11 am

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I haven't owned a horse since I moved here, and I miss it. But, you're right. Riding is muse fuel.

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4/1/2009, 10:29 am

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Chat thread about the stories here.

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4/1/2009, 10:29 am

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Sue and I are cyber twins. It's down right scary how alike we are in some things. Of course, she's the smart one.

Hey now...not when it comes to computers I'm not! emoticon

That's why we work so well together...we balance each other out.

And that's so funny about your bike...I used to do that when I was little too, with my next door neighbor. I was usually the sheriff and he was the deputy! emoticon

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4/1/2009, 10:56 am

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I liked to day dream alone. emoticon

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4/1/2009, 11:01 am

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So do I...but occasionally it's nice to share one too! ;)

My solo daydreams are always much more...involved. emoticon

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4/1/2009, 11:05 am

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Involved = horny emoticon

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4/1/2009, 11:14 am

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Gotta raise my hand on that one, too. Guilty.

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:grin

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4/1/2009, 11:28 am

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Well hell...what are daydreams for? emoticon

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4/1/2009, 11:31 am

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Chat thread about the stories here.

thanks....ah the sexy days dreams....nice.

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