Comments/Suggestions I know, it took me long enough, eh? Well, they are done and I did the best of my abilities to finish the final chapter. Let me know if you want to see more or want more depth in the story you've just read. Thanks.
… I know there are some spelling erros here and there, and I will get them edited tonight when I return, also, revised versions of the first three parts are done as well, ie the bottom three, so have fun.