Orionbloodscale
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Chapter 2:Warlin
Where am I?Kieth inquired inside his head.
The void A voice spoke in Kieth's head.Are you a denzien of the dark, or a bearer of light?
Kieth pondered a while Niether.
What is your name?
Kieth Kieth awnsered.
The test begins..., describe yourself.
Could'nt it see him, of course not. Kieth could'nt even see himself.I am 15 years old. I have short brown hair, and pale blue eyes. My skin is light. Kieth felt odd explaining what he looked like. I'm skinny and fast. I- Kieth broke off.
What is the matter? the voice inquired.
I've got two birth marks, a crescent moon on my left shoulder, and a fire ball on my right.
the test is done, you pass...
Everthing changed. Kieth stood in the middle of a large grassland. Before him stood a large gold palace. As he approached the gates, he noticed two wizards gaurding the entrance.
Last rewritten by Orionbloodscale, 12/22/2006, 12:19 pm
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Phaetova
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Re: Chapter 2:Warlin
You really have mastered suspense and vivid descriptions! Keep it up!
(if this reply is in the way, go ahead and delete)
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Re: Chapter 2:Warlin
yes and the hapter is soon to be finished
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