Orionbloodscale
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Prolouge:The beginning of Chaos
here is another one of my books 
A dark figure loomed from the darkness. It was the shadowy figure of a large man in armor. Just the sight of it would send goosebumps down your spine. "I trust that you've brought them?" He asked, as if talking to himself. His voice was cold and gruff.
"Yes mi'lord," A rat-like faced small man spoke, spoke stepping up to the armored man. The rat-like man dug into his pocket revealing a grubby little package.
The armored man snatched it away almost instantly. He tore it open as he muttered. "Finally.. mumble.. grumble.. he follows through on his word." Inside the package were two small, ebony black rings. They glowed brightly with the aura of darkness.
"Why are these rings so importent?" the rat man inquiered, overwhemled with curiosity.
"These are the rings of chaos." the armored man began, "together the dark powers of these rings have the potential to control all the realms. But individually these rings have powers of their own. Ebony, the stronger of the two, grants its bearer with the power over shadows. Even the purest of souls would be overwhelmed by the power this ring contains. Only those with strong wills can control it."
"Shadow, the weaker one, is more unusual. It, unlike any other forbidden ring, has it's own personality. It examines the bearer's soul, then chooses whether it will submit to that person grasp. If it allows it, the ring will connect itself to the wearers soul and amplifies its' bearers powers by extrordinary measures."
As the armored man concluded his explanation, the rat-man murmered under his breath, "and I expected a breif explanation."
The armored man dismissed the rat man. " and now, ultamite power," he said eyes glinting inside his dark helmet. He raised the darker ring to his right hand, his armor gleamed and illuminated the cold night air.
He rose the other ring to his left hand. But as it loomed closer, he roared a cry of anguish. He shook his hand violently as smoke rose from his palm. "Arrgh," he roared, "I was rejected, damn ring.." he broke off realizing what had happened. He'd lost the ring. A blood-curtling roar of fury echoed through the night.
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Phaetova
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Re: Prolouge:The beginning of Chaos
You asked that any spelling errors be pointed out, but I don't know if you want that here or in a PM. I was just going to say that inquired was spelled wrong, but that might have been a typo?
(This is an interesting beginning!)
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Re: Prolouge:The beginning of Chaos
please here
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