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Bart77
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Rosalia


My first portrait here - please advise what should I amend..emoticon

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Not a lot wrong Bart, the eyes look over sharpened and bright to the rest of the image and tend to dominate [as they should} to much, I would try to soften them a little, great shot all the same emoticon

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Tahnks Martin. You are right with these eyes - I will change it
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I agree with Martin, plus the forehead looks a a bit too soft to me. Some more work and it's a great portrait.
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dont know if it really needs to change...its slightly surreal but printed big that would grab you from across a room

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quote:

crimbo wrote:

dont know if it really needs to change...its slightly surreal but printed big that would grab you from across a room



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