Hi Shirley
The crop is a weeny bit tight, do you have more in the original? If not it is OK as is.
As for the contrast I had a play with it and felt if you adjusted the levels to 15:50:255 and then masked back detail in the socks and shirts it lifted this no end.
Great concept, well done.
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