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Re: ciggie break
I like this composition,perhaps. The upper right part of the pic sufferd from distorion removal and looks a bit unnatural. Architecture is terrible to shoot, especially with a wide angle.
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8/Oct/09, 8:54 am
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Thanks Martin
yes removing one distortion will add another but I am happier with this version as the original had the overpowering converging line which gave the wrong feel to the image
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Hi Chris,
Gosh you have big buildings in Shetland 
Really like this one, nice bit of documentary photography. The scale of the women against the building works very well IMHO.
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Good scale, is that the real sky that was there ? looks realy over cooked, the sky I mean
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Nice, and great scale on this.
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Martin said:
is that the real sky that was there ? looks realy over cooked, the sky I mean
It got the Crimbo treatment.
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thank you Dave
one mans overcooking is another mans style
but that said does it detract? would dropping in a plain black sky work better?
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thank you Dave
one mans overcooking is another mans style
but that said does it detract? would dropping in a plain black sky work better?
Agreed about style, for me it looks odd and does distract as it was the first thing I noticed, looks somehow out of scale with the rest, but what do I know 
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Re: ciggie break
the rhs of the pic pulls the eye too far away from the smokers - maybe try a crop with the lower part of the rh building cropped out?
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What I wanted was for the eye to go to the Mersey Tunnel building and to miss the smokers in the other corner
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