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Old saws
Aging quietly on a wooden wall, these typical Japanese saws arrested my eye.
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22/Jul/09, 8:12 am
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Re: Old saws
Hi,
I am going to venture a thought on this, but I am definitely no expert so dont take my comments to seriously.
To me this seems a little flat, the wood lacks definition and the saw blades dont seem to have any detail. Also the image does seem a little soft.
Did you use flash? If so maybe trying to use available natural light would give a more contrasty look, maybe this could also be done in the post processing but I am in no position to comment on how to do that.
I hope my comments don't seem too harsh, I should wait and see what others more competent than me say before you take my thoughts too seriously!
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22/Jul/09, 8:35 am
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