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Orlando and Hannah: beginning of part 1
Here we go people. Thank you to all those people who have read it. Thank you so much. I didn’t expect it its so cool. Okay since I thought I would hurry up the story. It is an hour into the flight to New Zealand and Hannah and Orlando are sitting in first class seats together Billy behind them. In my story the flight is going for 18 hours.This story is going for ages and Hannah is going to be a big time actress but she will be with orli. she is going to be in some popular movies like bend it like beckham and will take some roles of leading ladies. i hope u guys dont mind.
It was an hour into the flight and Hannah was literally bouncing in her seat, she was so excited.
“How long have we got to go to get to New Zealand” Hannah asked
“About 17 hours” Orlando replied.
Hannah eyes literally popped out of her sockets.
“17 hours on a plane, you have got to be kidding me” Hannah
“Nope” Orlando laughed.
Orlando was laughing at the sight of her shocked face. Clearly she didn’t expect a long flight over. She sat there with her arms crossed, pouting like a little girl.
“I tell you what, why don’t we ask questions about each other to get to know” Orlando asked.
Hannah turned to him and took her beanie and scarf off and smiled.
“Sure”
Orlando scrunched his eye brows down and did a lop sided smile. Hannah saw this and tilted her head sidewards.
“What?”
“you don’t stay angry long do you?”
“Not unless the person deserves it”
Orlando smiled. It wasn’t going to be hard for Orlando to live with her. So far what he had known of her. She was bubbly, funny and quirky person who loved to laugh and smile and be happy. She had both sides of a great girl gorgeous inside and out. And she didn’t seem the type to worry about her diet or anything. Not that she needed it, she was tiny as it was.
“Okay lets start with our name. what your full name” Orlando asked
“Hannah Aoifa Walker my middle names is spelt a o I f a but is pronounce ee fa it means beautiful, radiant, joyful. It Irish, my last name is Walker”
“I like your accent” Orlando complimented
“Thankyou”
Hannah took of her shoes and crossed her legs on the seats.
“Your name”
“Orlando Jonathon Blanchard Bloom”
“mouth full”
“Where about in Ireland did you grow up in?”
“Sligo but the last four years in London
“Wow big change”
Hannah seemed to wander off in this distance a bit and looked at Orlando
“Yeah it was”
“What about you Orlando where did you grow up”
“Canterbury Kent”
“Siblings”
“Only an older sister Samantha, two years older than me”
“You”
“Only an older brother Matthew. Five years older than me”
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20/Jul/2006, 20:35
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Re: Orlando and Hannah: beginning of part 1
It's great. The story is really moving nicely. Oh and just a tip: When you add a new chapter, just reply to your original topic. Don't start a new topic evreytime u have a new chapter. Don't worry I done the same thing when I starting writing Luck or Destiny. Lol Keep Writing!
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20/Jul/2006, 22:15
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Re: Orlando and Hannah: beginning of part 1
"Parents" orlando asked.
That same look came on her face when she looked so distant awawy.
they were on their way to my ballet recital. snow falling on the windows on the car, i a drunk driver in a four wheel drive went through a red light. they hit my mum and dad.
Orlando felt sorry for her a soft feel cam across his face.
"Im sorry about that. You must be strong."
Hannah laughed sarcastically and shook her head.
"Its my brother who is the strong one, i almost gave up ballet and acting but he told me to put up with it. because he said there is some things in life that are tough and you see those things as a burden and a real struggle and you have to mission through and many ways you do but never forget there is an amazing opprtunitity within each struggle and to make a positive out of a negatitive and without having the sour u wouldnt appreciate the sweet"
"That brother of yours must be amazing"
"trust me he is. we both needed to get out of Ireland so we moved to London and he looked after me i got a job. i kepted up my ballet and he did his thing."
Hannah slapped orlando friednly on the shoulder. and iggled a little.
"Now enough of me you parents"
"Sonia mum, Harry dad"
"What are they like you going to NEw Zealand and you acting?"
"Theyre happy for me and they will certainly keep me grounded"
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20/Jul/2006, 23:42
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Re: Orlando and Hannah: beginning of part 1
people plz read this and give me ideas. i have a huge range of them. so many kool ideas.plz someone read it. here is a rough overview: her older brother is Matthew Walker and im making him a striker for Manchester United and he will know david beckham. shes from ireland so i going to try and make it so she knows the westlife boys. guys how do u guys think hannah knowing Stuart Townsend or Colin Farrel since theyre both irish. in this story hannah and orlando r completely obblivious to each others feelings. billy already knows her. she will be best buds with dominic and elijah. sean bean is like a uncle and viggo mortensen is like a dad to her.orlando will completely dote on her as a geat and close friend. plz tell me wat u think. i will really appreciate it. thankyou.
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22/Jul/2006, 6:53
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Re: Orlando and Hannah: beginning of part 1
Maybe she could know Stuart and Colin through drama school in Ireland. They would have to be a couple of years ahead of her...but it's and idea. I love the idea of including the while fellowship!
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22/Jul/2006, 13:42
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Re: Orlando and Hannah: beginning of part 1
he yeah awesome idea. thanks for that.
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22/Jul/2006, 22:35
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Re: Orlando and Hannah: beginning of part 1
no prob lol. It's summer and I'm bored! My mind run's wild!
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22/Jul/2006, 22:39
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Re: Orlando and Hannah: beginning of part 1
thought i would let ppl know, updates will be up, its just i am moving and have exams
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29/Jul/2006, 4:29
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Re: Orlando and Hannah: beginning of part 1
Okay. I hope you don’t mind but I kinda skipped the plane trip part I couldn’t find it. But if you would like I will post it for you. Okay ppl the weary trallers are in New Zealand. Sorry if it’s a bit dodge. Im dying to get into it. I know one thing that is going to happen and its going to be huge for hannah. The only person who knows this and its dar. .
Hannah was fast asleep on orlando. Her hair was tussled her fringe over her face.. They had grown quite comfortable with each other. Hannah curled up on him. He had one arm around her. A blanket over them. Her head propped on his chest. Both sound asleep and idealic. Orlando woke up beside Hannah and stretched out his arm and gave out a huge yawn.
“Aye nice to see your’re awake from your beauty sleep. Had fun” Billy said with an evil grin
orlando gave a gave a small laugh and gave asmirk.
“Yeah I had a great sleep actually”
Billy smiled. His cheeks riseing and dimples emerging too.
“yeah and im sure you wer quite comfortable too” as he reclined back in his seat.
orlando chucked his pillow at Billy. Billy ducked and it missed him laughing..
“You better wake up little half pint there. We almost to new Zealand”
Olrnado didn’t really want to wake up Hannah. She looked peaceful. Her blonde braids tussles, her mouth slightly apart.. The blankets up too her chin completely curled up in a small bal with plenty of room to spare..
“Do I really have to wake her up Billy.she looks like angel”
Billy reaised his eye brows straight and snorted. If only he knew
“orlando you will learn in time. That half pint there may look like an angel. I have known her for many years and believe me she can be worse and more evil than Lucifer himself trust me. Don’t let that blonde hair get to you and those purple eyes corrupt your mind”
orlando laughed to himself. Orlando put his hand on Hannah’s shoulders. Even though Orlando didn’t really want to. He kinda liked to watch her sleep. She looked well… pretty. But what was he to think. He has only known her for not even a proper day. Anything could happen.
“Hey Hannah. Wake up we almost here”
Hannah stirred a little and slowly opened her eyes. Which of course sparkled to orlando How many people have purple eyes in the world. She felt tired and jet lagged her back ached a litte, but she felt comfortable . Hannah wiped the sleep from her eyes and at up and yawned with her hands out strectched .
“good morning sleeping beauty. You look a treat” Billy sarcastically pointed out.
Hannah hair was all ruffled, static make her hair frizz. Parts of her braids sticking out.
“oh shut up Billy. Your such a nice person really” she pointed out as she itched the crown of her head.
The over head light came on for seat belts to be fastened. Hannah eyes bulged. Her heart beat faster and faster a huge smile on her. She was so excited. Hannah turned her head and saw the new Zealand beauty.
“Look orlando we are here. Oh my god billy. Look out there” Hannah excitedly said.a she pinted out new Zealand with her hand
Orlando leaned in to the window and he himself in awe. Outside they saw gorgeous green mountains, big cities, fields. Both like kids in a candy store. Theyre faces were bright cheeks rosy. Eyes wild with excitement and nerves.
‘Oh my lord its amazing “ Billy whispered.
Orlando, Hannah and Billy landed in New Zealand. Hannah was marvelling at the size of the air port. Hannah is an 18 year old in half way around the world, no big brother over looking her every move. Hannah was wandering in front of the two lads, just awe spired the hugeness of the airport.. orlandos eyes trailed to hannahs rear. Billy smiled to imself.
‘Orlando there are some things that amuse her that don’t normally to others”
Orland quickly snapped out oh his world looking at her rear ans smiled to Billy’
‘I have no idea what you just Billy he mubled”
Hannah got her video camera out from her bag and pointed to herself.
“hello and Im Hannah Walker and im in New Zealand on a top secret mission with a tall young man who isn’t that bad for the eyes who is Orlando Bloom and oh yeah there you have the short ass Scotsmand Billy Boyd”
Hannah pinted the camera towards Orlando and Billy who were walking towards her
“See young ladies, there is the tall handsome one Orlando. Say hello”
Orlando smiled, a gorgeous lop side. And waved to the camera.
“hello ladies” olrando peplied.
Hannah pinted back the camera to herself.
“See look at that, a young polite man who many of mothers would gladly have being their daughters brought home”
“And oh yeah there is short ass Billy”
“Hey you squirt. You cant talk. Your re not exactly tall either”
Hannah put on a baby face, her lips puted and battered eyelashes.
“Orlando Billy’s picking one me”
“Billy stop picking on such a sweetheart. Billy look at her she gorgeous”
Hannah poked her tongue out at Billy and waved to Orlando.
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Re: Orlando and Hannah: beginning of part 1
Awe! I really liked that chapter!
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“Do I really have to wake her up Billy.she looks like angel”
Aww... How sweet!
Update soon!
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