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Re: Orlando and Hannah: beginning of part 1
Hey guys here is another bit of the story. I don’t know where to go from here. I have a lot of ideas and it will take me ages to write it, to get to these ideas. I have wrote a little bit where she meets the cast of the fellowship. Do people want me to put that up by any chance. I was thinking she meets the fellowship and I fast track the training part. Like um do an overview of it. Little tales of their training like incidents from horse riding, now and arrow, sword fighting, Hannah’s dialect training to get rid of her accent. Please let people know of this story I would love ideas and people to read it. I have so many stories to write about Hannah and Orlando, just don’t know how to get there that’s all lol. By the way people read story without a name. its great. The more people read it maybe updates come quicker. It a great story and tell people about mine plz.
Hannah awoke to the smell of sizzling cooking bacon and fried eggs. It made Hannah’s stomach grumble. Hannah pulled back the doona covers and went through her cases to change. She picked out a pair of Nike track pants and a shirt sleeved Manchester United No9 Walker shirts and pulled her socks on and a pair of fluffy, warm ugh boots. There was no need to put a jumper on she could already fill the heaters making the house feel warm. Another reason she was used to the London and Irish weather of sorts. Hannah bounded down the stairs and towards the lustrous smell of breakfast.
“Mm what’s that cooking Orlando?” Hannah asked as she sat down on a bar stool near the bench.
“Eggs, bacon and of course good ol’ English tea. An excellent English breakfast”
“You know, we could cook an IRISH breakfast”
“Nah ah, now way. I have seen what you guys consider as a breakfast.
Orlando seen that Hannah had a Manchester United top, it had No9 with the name Walker on it.
“nah he thought. No way” he thought.
“You a fan of Matt Walker?” he was implying on just what all the English girls all do. Matthew Walker is a dream boat to the girls. He is 6 foot tall, chocolate brown hair, perfect white teeth, a great smile, a sporting buff body, bronzed tan all over deep emerald green eyes, a great personality, not a snob and has a reputation of t\being the most perfect guy on earth and he is single!
“I see that look on your face Orlando, no way would I ever consider Matt Walker like that. There are other blokes out there”
RING RING
“Hey have you seen my phone?” Hannah asked
“I think I saw it in the huge lounge room”
“Thank you””hello stranger. I was awake like the whole trip. …….Oh yeah his name is Orlando………….Nah hes great, actually hes cooking breakfast, eggs bacon and English tea…………Nah you don’t have to be. The house is awesome….God what are you doing talking to me. You have got training in a couple od hours.I will be fine I promise, you go to sleep. No you go. Love you Bye”
Hannah walked back into the kitchen and sat down on the bar stool.
“Protective brother wanted to see how I was”
“You got to think it from his side. Here is his only kid sister half way across the world from where she is acting in a huge big budget movie that has a large majority of males for over a year. Most likely from the hopeful success of these movies you will be the next big thing in Hollywood. What do you think he’s worried about” Orlando laughed
“um that I might be swooned off my feet by a hunky actor and that I might actually get to meet Brad Pitt and Johnny Depp one day” she laughed.
Orlando laughed back. He got out the plates and dished up the breakfast and served it to the table and poured the tea. Hannah was savouring every single taste.
“mmm this so good. I have to cook you one day an Irish breakfast”
“And what does and Irish breakfast really entail?”
“Lets just say it is a breakfast for champions”
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20/Nov/2006, 21:42
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Re: Orlando and Hannah: beginning of part 1
hello ppl.more will be come up soon.plz tell ppl about this. i need all the help i can and with ur little or big or wat ever comments it really does help.thankyou to al.
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30/Nov/2006, 22:20
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I love it!!!!
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1/Dec/2006, 1:23
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wow thankyou so much for reading this.atleast i have one reader. willl have more coming up soon.could you please tell ppl about this story please.i would like other people's opinion.
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1/Dec/2006, 1:32
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Hello! This is so cute! I really like how you've set things up, and update soon!
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1/Dec/2006, 21:29
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np! I love this story!!!!
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Re: Orlando and Hannah: beginning of part 1
hello ppl more will come up soon i promise.how about ppl feel if i did a ned kelly one? in my story hannah is going to be a big a lister.she will be doing movies like blue crush, pearl harbor, million doolllar baby bend it like beckham. the roles she t taskes over those of.these young ladies actresses will still be fanous. my writinf teaceher taught me to not be frightened to write about something that will not happen
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10/Dec/2006, 6:31
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I really like when there is a story that blossoms into more. Gives all characters some balance and self. Keep going.
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10/Dec/2006, 16:01
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thankyou very much for writing that.im glad you like it i have tons of ideas for it all
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11/Dec/2006, 2:34
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Sorry guys this so rough but its anything better than nothing I guess. Plz write as much as you can please to help me. as i said this is a really rough draft like i said. The more comments there is it pipes me up to write more. Thank you to all those who read. i really do appreciate it.from Bianca.
“I cant believe I am half way around the world from my home. That’s scary and too think in 6 months time everyone will know who we are” Hannah said with excitement staring out of the window.
Orlando smiled to himself. Hannah seemed to be filed of so much life. He could see the excitement in her eyes and there always was a smile on her face.
“yeah that is scar. Then again you are known Half Pint”
‘yeah but with me doing Lord of the Rings, I will be known for my credit, my work ya know” Hannah sighed with a smile.
“yeah I do get you”
Hannah put down her hands on the table and raised her eyebrows briefly and looked at Orlando.
“I mean don’t get me wrong my brother is absolutely fantastic/ I want to stand on my own two feet. This time in New Zealand is going to be it. Before my parents died we never really had a home even with all that money, we didn’t have a home and I have a feeling here in new Zealand I wil have a home and a bigger family. We never spent a holiday at home. Never”
Orlando eyes bulged he couldn’t believe it. At home his family usually spent the holidays at t home and had quality family time.
“Really” he asked.
‘it was either some place in Spain, Italy or France, Greece somewhere in the world and even Australia. It going to be nice staying in one place”
Orlando felt sorry for Hannah. It seemed her family had all the money in the world and that did nothing for her or matt. There was no proper love.
“Why don’t you and your brother come to my family for Christmas? I am sure my mother wouldn’t mind certainly, not my sister to have the Matt Walker from Macnhester United in the house that is if she can talk to him that is” He sneakily said ****ing one eye brow.
“What?” Hannah replied.
“I can tell our Matts sister you two are practically twins. Didn’t take me very long Half Pint’
“Thank you Orlando nice to know that you didn’t suck up to much to me about my brother. Are you sure you want to have me and Matt at Christmas time. I wouldn’t want to intrude. You have only known me for what a day or two”
“You are Hannah Aoifa Walker. Your older brother is Matthew Walker, no9 Manchester united central striker. You like Allens Red Gummi Bears and jelly beans. I think you are the happiest go lucky, bubbly and quirky beautiful person I know and my family adore you”
Hannah bit her lip and became unsure. Hannah felt she really didn’t want to intrude on a family at Christmas time, but she smiled to the heavens and thought it would be great.
“Thank you Orlando that would be actually really nice”
Orlando had a smug look on his face stiffened his back a bit and had a proud smile on his face.
“I have to admit my mum is the best cook. I just hope she doesn’t start embarrassing me by showing naked pictures of me as a kid and that you wont be too bored. Canterbury Kent to sailing in Italy”
“Are you kidding? I would never be bored. My mother never cooked. It was always a chef who did it. Hey you never know maybe my brother could go on a date with Sam”
Orlando laughed ti himself
“its official my sister is going to love you”
A FEW HOURS LATER
Hannah was unpacking her stuff in her rooms. On the mantel piece she had various photos, her on Matthew’s shoulder when he won a best and fairest cup, a family picture on a boat, Hannah holding a surf board smiling. But when Orlando walked in the room the one that truly grabbed his eye was the picture of Hannah dressed up in her ballet out fit. Long flowing white silk skirt adorned with sparkle diamantes, her leotard pearl white and a sparkling tiara. She was looking sideways a nervous look on her face. Her purple eyes even more prominent.
“My first big ballet recital. I was nervous as hell like you wouldn’t believe it”
“You look really beautiful there how long ago was that?” Orlando asked.
Hannah felt herself blush from the s\inside and look at orlando
“Just a year ago. We performed at Guildhall. I was so scared” she replied.
“Guildhall wish I actually went and saw that now I remember I was just on my crutches then. Mum and Sam went and saw that. They loved you” he pointed out.
“Thank you” she said
RING RING RING
Orlando’s phone rang
“hello Orland here”
“hey Orlando its Billy here hows things?”
Yeah great. Hannah is jus un packing stuff”
“has she jumped on the bed yet”
‘yes she has and she broke it”
Billy began laughing.
“trust Hannah to do that. She has been dying to do that”
“What I was ringing about is that peter wants a meeting with all of the cast. Hannah can come too”
Oh ok cool”
Yeah I am coming to your place with two work colleagues here be there say 20 minutes”
“See you then mate” Orlando replied
“Hannah billy is coming around with two colleagues. We are going to meet the rest of the cast. You are coming too”
“Yep I will get ready”
Orlando left the room to let Hannah get changed.
Hannah had to quickly get changed into something decent for a change, she was going to meet the rest of the cast and crew. She rummaged through her suit cases, picked out a long sleeve white top. A pink t shirt with bold Rip Curl in front, dark tight denim jeans and black converse shoes and just grabbed a beanie and scarf and a jacket.
There was aknock at the door and Orlando jogged to answer it.
“hey Billy my man how are you mate?” Orlando asked as he gave him a man hug.
“yeah good mate. This is dominic and of course you would know Elijah Wood”
Orlando shook both of their hands. All hobbits around Hannah height.
“Hannah Billy here with a couple of people” Orlando yelled out.
Hannah came running down the stairs.
Elijah and Dominic introduced themselves
“Nice to meet you guys. Im Hannah”
Dominic scrunched up his eyes and he knew he recognised her from somewhere.
“I recognise you Hannah. Its like I have seen you heaps”
“Matthew Walker is my older brother” Hannah replied
Dominic’s eyes bulged and he couldn’t believe it.
“I am in the house of a famous World Cup footballer’s sister. This is so cool.”
“I gues I am going to be in the good books when he comes to visit”
“Elijah Wood in the Flesh. I am honoured”
Elijiah casually shook his head and sighed.
“Let me guess you adored me in Flipper and thought I was such a cut elittle kid”
“No actually the Faculty”
Elijah’s eyes piped up.
“wow somebody actually likes me in something other than Flipper”
“Sorry to disappoint you Elijah but it was Josh Hartnett I liked’
The rest of the guys cracked up in laugheter and Elijah laughed himself.
“I like you Hannah I really do. Time in New Zealand is going to be fun with you around”
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