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summary: Orlando is sick of the famous life. He decides to changes everything about him..but what happens when he runs into wannabe vampires and the entising Elise Christophe...Will she find out who he is or will he be able to keep it a secret... READ ON ...( warning: very very short first chapter...sorry)
Orlando sat in Fiona's office twidling his thumbs and trying not to make contact with the angry agent. ," ORLANDO WHAT ARE YOU THINKING?!?!?!" He looked up from his spot and stared wide eyed at fiona," well its just...how do I put this..I want out Fi. Its just not working right." He smiled shyly and went back to twidling his thumbs in nervousness. Fiona looked at him and gave him an evil grin," Orlando,darling, what isn't working out right, I mean you have 2 movies that are sure hits in the works and you have millions of adoring fans. Please enlighten me what isn't working out." " That's just it Fi the fans. They have grown out of control. I mean last night i walked out to get the mail and i had my shirt ripped off. MY $500 SHIRT !!!! Not only that , the letters i have recieved from fans are growing more disturbing and all these tabloids. I love acting but this is not what I had in mind." Orlando stood up and began pacing back and forth. " So what is it you plan to do then? Run off back to England...God knows what will happen when you get off the plane..." Fiona looked at Orlando and stood up," Have you the slightest idea what you are going to do to get out of this then?" " Yes i have . I will change my name and my appearance. No one will notice me. Not a single damned person will." " Your speaking crazy Bloom do you realize that. " She eyed him and motioned for him to sit back down. " I can't stay here any longer and I won't go back to England ..for the time being." he almost said the last part in a whisper. " What about your accent..Everyone knows you have had a hard time trying to get the american accent down." " I'll keep it...I can alter it in a sense to a different part of England. I could always get the Birmingham accent." " An accent is not something you can buy Orlando... so where do you plan on living then. If you want to live a normal life you can't live in a mansion. You may have to move to a flat. A very SMALL flat." " I can handle that. I will look into things tonight. Cancel every movie Fi . I haven't signed any contracts so there shouldn't be an issue. " He stood up," Until tomorrow Good bye." Orlando walked out of the room and smiled to himself. He had jsut did something he never thought he would ever do. Quit showbiz. Now all he needed to do was find a new city and home to live in, hair dye , and contacts. -------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- I know it was extremely short but I will have more. And trust me it will all get more interesting soon. The first few chapters of a story are always boring so hang in there people.
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17/Feb/2007, 15:13
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Interesting! I think this story will do good. I can't wait to find out what Orlando does to disguise himself.
I can't wait. I hope to read more soon!
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19/Feb/2007, 1:53
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Ok so here is another chapter...Hopefully its better...
Chapter 2:
Orlando entered his Beverly Hills mansion and dropped his jacket on the couch “ Home sweet home....I guess..” He walked over to his answering machine and pressed play...
Message One: Orlando hey man this is Elijah give me a call back ... Its about the info you asked for.
Orlando smiled. he had been thinking about leaving for a couple of months now and he has asked Elijah to get some info on cities. He was particularly fond of Chicago...It seemed to be nice enough for him.
Message Two: Orlando its your mother please don’t do anything stupid call me back if its not too late.
He pressed stop on the machine and went to the fridge , “ Mum I wouldn’t do anything stupid .... this is going to get me out of this stupid situation.” He grabbed a beer out of the fridge and sat on the counter. , “ What would I do to make a disguise???” He looked around and saw a magazine with a gothic man on the front. His eyes widened ,” I GOT IT!!!!!!” he quickly rushed and picked up the magazine...” I could go Goth...or maybe less Goth... That means I would have to dye my hair black and get contacts...So now I have my disguise but where am I going to live???”
His cell phone began to ring... He looked at the caller ID and it say Frodo .” Yellow and blue Yellow speaking since there never is a blue here...”
“ ELF!!!!! hey man what the bloody hell I called you like 5 times today with the info....Are you sure you want to do this I mean you won’t be famous anymore.”
“ I am positive Lij I mean come on this is getting pretty out of hand here. plus all the films I have done recently are flops...I think I should go back to stage and become an unknown again.”
“ Your retarded elf you know that ..In the years that I have known you ..you have always been the one to tell me not to do things well now its my turn. You can’t give up on something because of a few stalker fans or movie flops its part of the biz.”
Orlando sighed. Elijah was right. ,” Well I understand that but I have thought about this through and through and I am going to do it... And the best place to live it out is in Chicago.”
“ Alright but you better be careful...if i may ask why in the hell Chicago???”
“ Its a place no one would expect me to live ... Hey I am going to let you go I have some shopping to get done.”
“ Alright but be careful”
With that they hung up. Orlando smiled to himself.. He was actually going to go through with this. He was going to leave the biz and become and unknown... “ An unknown what....**** what the hell am i going to do” He looked around his kitchen and spotted his camera..” THAT’S IT!!!! A photographer!!! Orlando you are a genius”
Orlando walked out of his kitchen and sat on the couch ...” Now i need a name...Hmmm Michael...no not right...James.. to bland... Gabriel...I like it Gabriel Du Cordray .. I have found my name as well. Its exotic and fits my new self. “ He leapt up and walked out the door to buy his supplies for his new look.
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I love this story. However, I don't know about Orlando going gothic It doesn't sound like something he would deeply consider. But that was just my openion... to each their own.
I hope to read more soon.
Oh, and please do read my fic on here too.
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27/Feb/2007, 0:51
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I think you'll hate my criticism but here it goes anyway.
No one talks like that and nothing happens that quickly. Make each chapter a few paragraphs longer at least. I find myself going "Ah! What just happened? What's going on?"
That being said, do continue to write! I want to see the crazy stuff that boy gets into. 
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wow i forgot i put this story up. i am not even working on this story anymore. lol. and no i do not hate your opinion. i like getting critism its nice. I understand that things dont move that fast but also keep in mind that i wrote that almost 2 years ago. LAWL! but hey thanks for letting me know. oh and WELCOME TO THE BOARD!!!!
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3/May/2008, 23:49
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Thank you for the welcome.
Yes, I realized that date after I posted. 
What are you other stories? I'm interested now!
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i thought of this story a little while ago ... i am in love with vampires and i always wondered what it would be like if orlando played a vampire... 
well ttfn ta ta for now.
I NEED SOMEONE TO SAY SOMETHING..FEEDBACK ANY FEEDBACK I AM BEGGING YOU GUYS * gets on hands and knees* please please somebody!!!! 
