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I woke up to the smell of something wonderful. I sat up, remembering where I was when I seen Breana in the kitchen.
"Morning love." I smiled. She turned her head, puling the ipod earbuds from her ear. "Huh?"
"Good morning!" I said a little louder. She laughed, laying the headphones around her neck.
"Morning Dom. Did you sleep well?" She asked as she cracked two eggs on the side of a bowl.
"Very well." I assured. "Where are Orly and the girls?"
"Sleeping." she laughed. "They should be up any minute though."
"How did Orlando's date go?"
"Good, he said." She smiled. "He seems to really like her."
"Good. I thought he would." Very good, because the closer he gets to her...the farther he gets from you darling I thought. Sure, I wanted Orlando to be happy, and I was sure Miranda would make him so, but the extra incentive was knowing he woudln't be making a play for Breana.
"Are they going out again tonight?" I asked.
"I don't know. You'll have to ask Orlando. Which means you also get to tell him breakfast's ready."
"You're sending me to wake the monster?" I asked, perking an eyebrow.
"You asked for it." She said, and I could see a teasing glimmer. "You wake Orlando, and I'll wake his offspring." She said, wiping her hands on her shorts, and walking int the girls room. I sighed, and walked into Orlando's room, throwing a pillow at him.
"Get up elfboy."
"Go away." Orlando groaned.
"Not a chance. Get up."
"Dom, I will murder you and not let it bother my coincence. You know that right?"
Suddenly I felt a whoosh of air, and looked down to see the girls running past me, and jumping into bed with their father. I turned to see Breana behind them.
"Thought you could use some help." She explained. I looked over and laughed at her.
"Ah, my hero!" I said melodramatically. "You might have just saved my life Miss Bryant. However can I repay your fierce gratitude?" I said playfully, bowing, and kissing her hand.
She laughed, rolling her eyes at me. "Hmmm...what can you do to repay me...learn to flirt better?" She teased with a wink, that made those dreadful butterflies in my stomach go crazy. "Come on girls, let's eat before it get's cold." She said, as the girls jumped off the bed, following Breana into the kitchen.
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Get Miranda outta there!  We all know who belongs together!
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22/Feb/2008, 0:30
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I laughed, watching the girls run off with Breana. Dom was leaning against the wall, watching her.
"Dom, you're drooling." I said, crossing my arms over my chest.
"Oh..um...sorry." he stuttered, as if he was trying to regain composure.
"You really like her don't you?"
"Yeah...I really do." He said. I glanced over at Breana. I really didn't blame him. In another time, another situation, I'd probably be as crazy over her as he was. I'd seen Dom in a few serious relationships...and when he was committed...he was commited. I sighed. "Well, I was thinking of taking the girls to the beach tonight...any maybe inviting Miranda. Why don't you ask Breana out?"
"You think she'd go?"
"I think so. If nothing else, she'd go to be nice."
"Oh, that's helpful." He scoffed.
"But I think she likes you too. Go for it."
Dom looked back at my confused."Seriously?"
"Yes, but if you hurt her, I'll make sure you never have the capability to be a manwhore again."
Dom laughed. "Got it."
"Boys! Breakfast is getting cold!" Breana called, turning around.
"What are you two conspiring back there?" She said, putting her hands on her hips.
"Nothing!" We answered in unision, walking into the kitchen.
"Mmmhmm. I'm sure." She laughed, putting plates in front of us.
Breana's POV
After breakfast, I started cleaning up the kitchen, putting dishes into the dishwasher. Suddenly, someone took a plate from my hand. I turned to see Dom.
"What are you doing?"
"You cooked, you shouldn't have to clean too."
"But-"
"Don't argue."
"Well, well....perhaps chivalry isn't dead after all." I smiled, walking up to my room.
"Hey Breana?" I heard.
I turned, looking back at Dom. "Yes?"
"There's this great little resturaunt down by the beach in town."
"Okay...."
"Would you like to go with me tonight?"
"The kids-"
"Orlando said he'd watch them."
"Oh.." I smiled. "Then sure, I'd love to."
Dom smiled. "Great. I'm leaving in a few minutes, but I'll pick you up at...seven?"
I nodded. "Okay..I'll see you then."
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Nothing against Dom at all.....but I'm pulling my hair out here! Orlando and Breanna, I'm starting a petition 
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28/Feb/2008, 0:59
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Don't worry you two =] Orlando and Breana are destined for each other, and they will be together. Patience is a virtue. I'm tired of writing fics where they fall in love at first sight. Romantic as it may be, it's not very realistic, atleast not from my expierences. I'm trying to build a solid relationship with Orlando and Breana, before things develop into something more. When it happens, it'll be one of those 'why couldn't I see what was right in front of me' things. They already love each other, they just haven't realized it yet. And since you two are such faithful readers, I'll give you a little spoiler to what's brewing in my evil mind, lol.
The chapter about the barbecue [the one Orlando mentioned inviting Miranda too] will definatly be a chapter you'll want to read.
Something unexpected happens, and thought it seems that it might destroy their friendship...it will make them realize they have feelings for each other.
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I'm going to see My school's production of Steel Magnolia's in a couple hours. I may get a reply in before then, but I'm not sure.
My brain is completley exhausted from the American Angel in London update.
When you read it, you'll see why.
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I defiantly see why your brain is fried. But it was such a great update!
And yes I love that you're not having a love at first sight kinda things here, i'm just giving ya' my response
It's great how you're developing the story, keep up all the great work!
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