Mental Distortions ( THE SEQUAL...please do not move it! or i shall cry) I KNOW I KNOW!!! it has been over a year since i last wrote any stories for on here. I have been extremely busy with school. Heck my school life is getting so hectic i have to drop choir for this career thing called AK Smith. hey its for 6 college credits i am definantly taking that opportunity, well anywho i hope you enjoy this and trust me from what i have planned out its going to be creepy/scary. Also in the end romantic! i think...its still a WIP! well enjoy the first chapter of MENTAL DISTORTIONS the sequal to "The Kidnapper or in This Case Mannapper"
Chapter One: New Beginnings
“It has been 2 years since the kidnapping of Orlando Bloom. He survived getting shot and I myself survived getting stabbed. My name is Emily . I am the police officer that lived in the apartment below where he was kept. I was the one who he fell on when he was shot by John Boone.”
2 years is a long time. Its a long time to not tell someone that you are glad they have lived and its a long time for someone who you helped survive to remember you.”
Emily put down her journal and sobbed. Yes 2 years had passed. And not once did Orlando try and contact her. She wished she could just see him one time just to see how he was. “ He probably has forgotten my name. Just not what I had done.”
She stood up from her desk and walked to her living room. Cujo was sitting on the couch looking peaceful. “ hey there cuji what are you up to” He looked up and grunted and laid his head back down. “ Yeah I hear ya.”
Just then her telephone rang . Slowly she picked it off the receiver and pressed the TALK button “ hello?”
“Ah Ms. Altemus this is Mr. Conner from the Silent Pond Institution in Canterbury.”
“OH!!!” she put her hand over the receiver and gave Cujo a silent scream of joy. She quickly went back to the phone after realizing that the man was still on the phone “ yes sorry about that what can I do for you Mr. Conner?”
“ Well Ms. Altemus I am calling in regards to your application...normally we don’t take people from all the way from America but with you we will take an exception. My colleagues and I were impressed with your work and we want to hire you as the security guard for our Institution...So what do you say Ms. Altemus are you in or out?”
“I am most defiantly in . Sir you have no clue as to how happy I am about this. Thank you so much sir. I won’t let you down.”
“ Well I am glad that you ‘re excited we need that around this place. So your plane ticket shall come in the mail soon. Oh I forgot to ask do you have any pets?”
“Why yes sir my German Shepherd Cujo.”
“I was afraid of that. You see we have an apartment set up and they don’t allow animals. Can you find a caretaker?”
“ Why yes.”
“ Alright I best be letting you go you have a lot of packing to do. Good Night Ms. Altemus and welcome to the team”
“Thank you Mr. Connor and good night to you as well”
Emily hung up the phone is disbelief. She has a job in Canterbury England. “ CANTERBURY!!!!!!” she screamed.
Is it like this
Is it always the same
If you change your phone number, will you tell me
Is it like this
Is it always the same
When a heartache begins, is it like this
If you like this
Will you remember my name
Will you play it again, if you like this
Re: Mental Distortions ( THE SEQUAL...please do not move it! or i shall cry) thanks! i am going to try and write more often! the story for some reason got moved! gah! i should try and post a new chapter within the next week!
Re: Mental Distortions ( THE SEQUAL...please do not move it! or i shall cry) Oh... very nice Emily! Better than the plot I came up with (that I PMed you a few minutes ago).
I wonder if Emily knows that Orlando is from Canterbury?
Was Orlando put into the Mental Institution? I hope not... that would be so sad... but makes a great plot!
Can't wait for more!
Donna
--- Orlando Bloom. Young Woman Tested, Mother Approved!
Re: Mental Distortions ( THE SEQUAL...please do not move it! or i shall cry) OMG! THE POWER OF CLEANING MY ROOM AT 4AM!!! I FOUND THE DAMNED PAGE FOR THE STORY!!! hee i am bloody awesome!!! I will try and get the new chapter up tonight. it will be short but at least its an update!
Re: Mental Distortions ( THE SEQUAL...please do not move it! or i shall cry) NEW UPDATE NEW UPDATE NEW UPDATE!!! CHAPTER 2!!! I finally have it! after a long wait i finally found it and have it. it is VERY short , BUT its something! tell me what you think.
Chapter two:
“ Take one step bloom and this bullet will go straight through you!” screamed John.
Orlando looked to his left and being him at the stairwell and he made his choice. Orlando took a step and...
“ AHH!!!” Orlando shot up from his bed. “ God Damn it!!” He turned his head towards the clock on his oak nightstand. “ How could it only be 1am?. That’s earlier than usual”
He reached for the handle on his nightstand and pulled out the drawer. He grabbed out a notebook that was titled “ Memories”. He opened it to the twelfth page and wrote down the time and date.
As Orlando flipped through the book he had to realize that the same dream have occurred so far every night for the past 2 months. “ So it has gotten worse.”
He flipped to the back cover which there was a pair of blue hand drawn eyes filled with sadness and a pair of brown eyes , his own, filled with fear and doubt.
“ Her eyes are all i remember.” Suddenly he heard his door open and a bright light filled the room.
“ There he is. grab him and strap him to the gurney.” A mans voice shouted.
“ WHAT! Wait you must be mistaken! I did nothing wrong!” Orlando wailed.
He felt four hands grab him and lift him off the bed “ Mr. Bloom it is Doctor Shay. Don’t you remember?”
Orlando looked around “ his” room. He then realized he was not at his home but in a hospital.
Re: Mental Distortions ( THE SEQUAL...please do not move it! or i shall cry) Why do they have to be so forceful with Orlando? It's not like Orlando is posing a threat!
I hope things start to get better for him and he gets treated better
Donna
--- Orlando Bloom. Young Woman Tested, Mother Approved!
Re: Mental Distortions ( THE SEQUAL...please do not move it! or i shall cry) I'M SORRY!!! i sooo busy right now. my intermediate writing teacher is giving us more and more work to do and well on top of all that i am in the middle of moving out of this apartment that gave me the insparation. DON'T WORRY I WILL GET ON IT! it will probably be posted on monday. i am sorry that i am keeping you waiting!
very nice Emily! Better than the plot I came up with (that I PMed you a few minutes ago).
I hope not... that would be so sad... but makes a great plot!
It's not like Orlando is posing a threat!
