SYSTEMS GIRL
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the amazing vacation!
well this is the beging of my story and remember this is all made up nothing is real. and i suggest u read the profiles of my characters first before reading this.
''well i'm bored'' Nicole said blowing a bubble with her gum
''well yea me too'' Amy said starring up at the sky they were lying on there backs on Nicole's field
''we could go swimming in the pond'' Amy suggested
''we've been swimming in there twice today its got real boring! dont u think?'' Nicole said sitting up
''ok your right'' Amy said getting up
''lets go get my bouncy ball and see how high we can go in the air'' Nicole said chewing her gum
''we havent done that at all today...lets!'' Amy said going towards the house
they got to the house and went and got her bouncy ball
''hahahaha it went really high that time!!'' Amy said retrieving the ball then Nicoles mom came out outside on the deck we're the girls were
''heya mom'' Nicole said blowing another bubble
''hey you know what were doin'' Nicoles mom said
''what''
''were going on a trip to LA!'' she said
And this is the begining of the adventure.
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11/Jun/2006, 2:38 am
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SystematicOptimism
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Re: the amazing vacation!
Sounds cool so far! Please go on! ::bounce!::
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11/Jun/2006, 2:48 am
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SYSTEMS GIRL
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Re: the amazing vacation!
ok i will right it tonight
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11/Jun/2006, 2:52 am
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SYSTEMS GIRL
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Re: the amazing vacation!
PART TWO
''WHAT ARE U SERIOUS mom '' Nicole said
''yes and i've talked to Amys mom and she said she can come with us'' Nicoles mom said
''WHAT! really oh yes'' Amy said
''yes i cant believe it at all'' Nicole said
''so when are we leaving?'' Amy asked
''in a week'' Nicoles mom said
''well i'm going home to get ready for the trip'' Amy said
''NO NO your staying the night'' Lara (Nicoles mom) said
''ooo yeah even better'' Amy said
''lets go in side now'' Nicole said
''yea ok yes'' Amy said so they went into Nicoles room witch was covered with band posters bu manly sy
stem of a down ones
''i'm so excited'' Nicole starting to jump around
''i know its so cool!! the home of system!'' Amy said sitting on Nicoles bed
''hey what if we meet system!'' Nicole said
''yea right i doupt it'' Amy said ''but if we did'' Amy added starting to kiss Nicole's poster of john
''hey u thats my poster'' Nicole said popping a new piece of gum in her mouth
''oh i'm sorry i was in my own little world'' Amy said
''yea i bet u were'' Nicole said laughing
''hey can i borrow a pair of your pj's?'' Amy said to Nicole
''yes of course go ahead'' Nicole said turning of her stario they were listening to system
''hey why'd u turn it of'' Amy asked
''well its 12:00 o clock i think we should go to bed'' Nicole said pulling the mattress out from under her bed
''oh i see'' Amy said turning off the lights
''goodnight'' they said to each other and went to sleep.
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11/Jun/2006, 5:05 am
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SystematicOptimism
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Re: the amazing vacation!
I like it! Its good, do continue!
PS. Im quite a compulsive gum chewer myself lol.
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11/Jun/2006, 8:26 pm
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SYSTEMS GIRL
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Re: the amazing vacation!
yea really i gave on of my trats to my character i love gum in fact i'm chewing right now *pop*
i'm going to continue
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11/Jun/2006, 8:28 pm
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CatzLuvzDaron
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Re: the amazing vacation!
I love love LOVE these stories! Majorly awesome! :D
Last edited by CatzLuvzDaron, 11/Jun/2006, 8:33 pm
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11/Jun/2006, 8:33 pm
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SystematicOptimism
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Re: the amazing vacation!
Me too! Im going to start working on the next part to my story! Ive been putting part 1,2,3 in the same post but should I make it in different posts??
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11/Jun/2006, 9:30 pm
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CatzLuvzDaron
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Re: the amazing vacation!
That's what i did for mine! ^_^
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11/Jun/2006, 9:33 pm
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SystematicOptimism
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Re: the amazing vacation!
Then I shall do that too! lol ::sheep::
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11/Jun/2006, 9:47 pm
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