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"Damnit" Shavo siad while coming to a stop in a long line of traffic "Might as well get comfotable" He said and unbuckeled his seatbelt.
"Why not" Dia said and also unbulcked hers.
Just then Dia`s cell phone rang.
"Hello? Yeah. Mmmhmm. I`ll be back in a bit. Yeah traffic jam. Huh? Oh, yeah I got a ride. From... A friend. Yeah. Okay then. See you tomorrow. Bye!" Christina had called Dia wondering where she was.
"Who was that?" Shavo asked.
"Mr, nosey I see!" Dia said smirking "It was my roomate Christina, she was wondering where I was and just wanted to tell me she was staying over her boyfriends house and not to worry about her" Dia answered.
"Ah, alrighty" Shavo said "Hey Dia?"
"Mmm yeah?" Dia replied in puzzlement.
"Well... uhh... never mind" Shavo said looking away.
"Um okay" Dia said and also looked away feeling slightly akward and not knowing why.

Dia`s POV:
"Did I say something wrong? GOD I knew I would do or say something stupid! He is probably offended in some way by my stupid self! But what did I say? I dont think I did anything... Did I? Whatever Im not going to fuss over it"
End POV

Dia realized her bag was still open and she still had her cell phone in hand so she went to put it away but her iPod fell out and hit the floor.
"Oh Damn!" Dia said reaching for it but Shavo had the same idea and got to it first. So instead of Dia grabing her iPod she grabed Shavo`s hand.
"Oh sorry!" Dia said pulling her hand away.
"No problem, and dont apologize you didnt do anything wrong" Shavo said now scrolloing through Dia`s iPod "Oh you dont mind do you?" Shavo said pointing to the iPod.
"Oh, no not at all go ahead" Dia said and just watching him scroll through the artists with such concentration.
"Haha I see your a BIG SOAD fan!" Shavo said getting wide eyed in exadgeration.
"Haha yep! How can you tell? Was it that I have every album or every unrealesed song?" Dia said laughing.
"Hey you mind if I put something on?" Shavo said "From your iPod that is"
"Uh, sure but how? I dont have a car hookup with me." Dai said.
"No problem I do" Shavo said and pluged the iPod in and tuned to Slipknot`s Duality.
"Nice chioce, Slipknot are one of my favorite bands" Dia said quickly flashing the "rock on!" gesture.
"You mind?" Shavo said putting his had on the volume controll.
"I would be insulted if you didnt" Dia said smiling.

Shavo`s POV:
"This chick is awosme.... I really am suprised most fans I meet either scream and hollar "I LOVE YOU!" or try to get in bed with me. Finaly a pretty girl who can still rock out and not act like a teeny booper" Shavo thought to himself.
End POV.


Well I guess next part will be sad! I got caught up in wirghting this so beware next part duuun duuuun duuuuuuuun!!! Haha!

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12/Jun/2006, 12:07 am  
 
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*applauds* Wooo! Amazing so far! Oh noooo! Not sad stuff! *hides, but is still intrigued* ::hide:: ::hee::

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12/Jun/2006, 12:14 am  
 
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wowo i love yours its so cool its really fun
more more ::rockon::
12/Jun/2006, 12:14 am  
 
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Thanks! Im glad you like it and im writing more as we speak! Or should I say type? lol
Well dont worry it wont be TO sad but still a litte ::hide::

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12/Jun/2006, 12:21 am  
 
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You know what's funny; this part of the board used to be empty, now it's like, one of the biggest parts! ::hee::

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12/Jun/2006, 12:31 am  
 


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